17 May

Life was meant for chasing dreams,
but now there are none- it seems.

have i become lazy to work for them,
or have i lost my ambition, o man!
or i am just too tired?
now wouldn’t that be weird-

with so much life still in hand,
with so many rules yet to bend,
with so many new things to try,
with so many horizons yet to fly.

But true this is, to my dismay,
with all my friends lost in the way,
now my energy got no source,
How far in such, can i force?


4 Responses to “Part-1”

  1. mrinal May 17, 2010 at 11:56 PM #

    superb 🙂

    di izzz real tym life bro…jst follow the rulezz u cant break it da tym of breaking the rules has lost ( i m nw enjoying that 🙂 )
    enjoy the life thrgh the people with the people ….

  2. Vinay Krishna May 18, 2010 at 9:36 AM #

    I really liked your thoughts and the way you knitted it in words. Could you please correct the typographical error in the word ‘Tired’? Please keep writing and posting your poems or stories. Hope to meet again through your words.

  3. Skywalker June 1, 2010 at 3:27 PM #

    Thanks Guys. I am definetely encouraged. Will try to write more frequently.

Say Something...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: